Audience Feedback

C. Finbow: “I like the transition from tense to funny.”
Alice Whiting: “The tension builds well, good unexpected comedy. The shot of her face and the handle added good drama. You could see the fear in her face. All round, eerie, funny and enjoyable to watch.”
Sophie Chapman: “It was very good. I especially liked it when there was a close-up of Alice’s face as she was opening the door.”
Aileen Peecock: “Starring roles! I’ll never eat crisps again! Good transition from person to person. Good close-ups.”
Conor McCormick: “I think that you should make the walk into the 'darkened area around door' dark too?! Around the stairs it will just make even more 'horror like' before then revealing FINBOW! HA Good one though! ;)”
Nikki Klimowicz: “The Pom Bears made me giggle so much! Although the slamming door and the dark bit to walk into was pretty awesome! But overall it was pretty good, fabulous acting from Alice.”
Claire Jenkins: “I thought because it is horror that there could of been more "danger" and suspense. Maybe different clothing as well, but I really liked it!!”
Anya Tooley: “It was so good...I was honestly getting quite scared, such a good anti-climax, although it did take me a while to get it. Anyhow...editing was fabulous so no worries. :)”
Andy Logan: “Hahaha ... that was hilarious! Especially like Mr Finbow stuffing his face. It was definitely an anti-climax. I must confess I was expecting Mr Finbow to get out something ghastly, or a pair of fluffy handcuffs. Really good. Well done my clever headed friend.”
Neil Brinkley: "Not really sure what was happening but I thought it was pretty good. Music was a bit loud at the start."
S. Allison: “Could have racked up suspense more at start. Liked twist at the end.”
Year 9: “I think the video was confusing. I didn’t know what was happening. To make it understanding.”
Year 9: “The music could have been more scary. The girl did not look scared.”
Year 9: “Good scenery. Scary start. It could have been a little bit longer. Weird conversation about crisps but funny. My favourite part was the start, very good.”
Year 9: “I think that the music is cool. It is actually quite atmospheric at the start. The bit where she opened the door was quite atmospheric. The end is funny but a bit stupid. 4 stars.”
Year 9: “Very good flow to film. Why crisps? I didn’t understand. Good actors.”
Year 9: “Good. Didn’t really get it - why the crisps? Didn’t like music/bit weird. Good actors.”
Kieran McGregor: “Why did you have a suspense like beginning then have Mr Finbow eating Pom Bears?”
Year 9: “Good idea. Awesome.”
Year 9: “Good work. Different music.”
Year 9: “Different music. Good ideas it was very good.”
Year 9: “Music too loud. Lack of sound effects, footsteps could be louder. Video quality (use different camera?) Lighting. Maybe work on audio tracks. Rest was fine.”
Rosie Howes: “Ideas were great but what you should do is make it darker at the start. But I like the idea of the door handle it’s great. My mark out of 10 is 8½. Well done.”
Georgia Musiol-Carter: “I thought that it was very good. I like the bit when she opened the door. There should have been longer conversation.”
Shannon Jaggard: “Good idea. The video was good and looked pretty real. But the door part, it went a bit dark and couldn’t see. I think it is a very good video with an ok build up. It looked pretty ok to me. :)”
Eve Taylor: “Different shots when she was walking. Different music. It was good but I think the last bit was a bit like an advert for Pom Bears.”
Paige Smith: “The different camera angles and shots were really good. The girl could have spoke with more enthusiasm. I thought the dramatic build up was really good and grabbed your attention.”
Laura Bloomfield: “Good suspense. Good when you zoomed in on door handle. The music suited.”
Year 9: “Very good start and the conversation did work on an anti-climax ending. It could have been made better by using different music (possibly more eerie) and the actor showing more emotion.”
Year 9: “I think the video was a bit confusing, but I liked the horror movie type beginning.”
Year 9: “The music was not very scary.”
Josh Flack: “Very good dramatic scene. Very good music. Good creativity. I would give A*.”
Year 9: “Very good. Door maybe could squeak when opened.”
Year 9: “Good idea. Rather funny. More light at the door. Good dramatic scene.”