Feedback on the film during production

I showed this version of the film to some of the cast and friends and asked them to tell me what they liked so far and what they thought I could do to improve it.

What they liked so far:
• Like the music, it's good.
• Good casting.
• Like the credits over the shots.
• Like the tap turning on to cut out the music.
• The inside shots are really good.
• Like the ending, really good (the tree piece).
• Like the flashbacks.
What they thought I could do to improve it:
• The sound levels need altering.
• The flashbacks need to be more prominent.
• Put the sped-up shots back to normal speed.
• Take out the 1st sped-up shot.
• Put the title over the end shot.
• Take out some of the walking shots.
• Modify the music over the end piece.
• Same amount of music to silence on the walking shots.
• Put the boy's 1st 2 paces on the pavement into slow motion.

After acting on a lot of the feedback that I got from my target audience, this is the end result of changing the film to suit what my audience thought I could do to improve the film.